This can not be the place.
A light flickered and went out causing the street to fade into the shadows, making the already creepy house look ominous.
Holly left her car and made her way up the row of steps leading to the house, stopping at the creak of the wood against her shoe.
Stop scaring yourself, just get to the door.
Running up the remaining steps, not giving herself time to think, she stopped at the big wooden door, taken aback by the skull door knockers.
As her hand slowly crept toward the knocker the door was thrust open. Holly drew in a deep breath to scream and took a step back until her gaze caught upon the man opening the door. She placed her hand on her chest in hopes of keeping her heart in place and tried to catch her breath, sucking in as much air as her starving lungs could take.
“Holly?”
“H-h-how do you know my name?”
“I was told you would be stopping by.”
Holly was still frightened, but she thrust her hand out to shake his. An electrical charge raced up her arm causing her whole body to tingle and her panties to dampen as his hand enclosed hers. Instant lust and wanting racked her body.
“What are you?” panted Holly, trying unsuccessfully to control her rampant desire.
“I am the unseen path you are destined to walk”
“What the hell is that supposed to mean?” His voice was making her body ache and yearn with an unnatural craving. She jerked her hand out of his and started to back away.
“Come, we must not waste time on your fears of the unknown. Tonight, on All Hallow’s Eve, my magic is at its strongest. If you wish to help Matt you need to enter my home of your own accord and allow my magic to become yours.”
“Again with the cryptic”, she sounded skeptical, but she once again took his hand in hers and let him lead her into the darkened corridor of the hall way, her panties a lost cause as her body throbbed in desire with each step they took. Even the scent of the house was erotic, like some den of iniquity. The only light to guide them was the candles lining the walls. The man led her into a room in the middle of the house with a huge bed occupying most of the space.
Holly tugged her hand out of the man’s and backed away when she saw the cage hidden just behind the edge of the bed. She turned to run, but the man’s voice stopped her.
“You must do this. If you don’t, all will be lost, everything that was, that is and that could be.”
“But-“
He drew her near wrapping his arms around her, pressing his lips to her. Her shocked intake of air allowed him entrance to the haven of her mouth and she was lost, willing to do what ever he wanted.
October 8th, 2008 at 7:01 am
I love this! I need to know more.
October 8th, 2008 at 7:18 am
I love this story! Rock on Jambrea!
Valerie
October 8th, 2008 at 7:53 am
Nice, Jambrea… You might want to encourage Holly attend those self-defense classes at her community college this weekend. If she’s free, of course.
Bryl
October 8th, 2008 at 9:27 am
Ooooh, so very spooky, Jambrea! Good job!
October 8th, 2008 at 12:39 pm
I loved this Jambrea. It had an eerie, edge of your seat feel to it that made you want to know more. At the same time it teased with the potential of some hot sex to come.
sandie
October 8th, 2008 at 12:41 pm
Looks good Jambrea I’d love to read more!!!
T
October 8th, 2008 at 7:28 pm
Loved it Jambrea! I liked the way you pulled us in and hint at the decadence to come. We are getting some awesome entries in!!
October 9th, 2008 at 10:04 am
That cage has me wondering Brea. Great cliffhanger!
October 9th, 2008 at 6:57 pm
Oh yummy…more, more, more, please
October 10th, 2008 at 11:33 am
Drew me in, held me tight, and left me begging for more.
October 10th, 2008 at 3:16 pm
OMG! Where’s the rest??? You can’t leave me hanging like that! Great start to a story. Now really…stop messing around and give me the rest!
October 13th, 2008 at 9:56 am
So, Brea, when are you going to finish this book?
You’ve got me hooked, you can’t just leave me hangin’!
October 13th, 2008 at 10:52 am
Wow! That was awesome. I definitely want more.
October 13th, 2008 at 2:09 pm
Jam, I so need more! ROFL!
This is awesome, you are so very talented.
Good Luck!
October 13th, 2008 at 2:19 pm
oh i love this…please post the rest….
October 17th, 2008 at 7:33 pm
More please *G*. Great start Jambrea. I can’t wait to read more
Kimmie
October 18th, 2008 at 1:00 pm
Love it! Keep going!
October 19th, 2008 at 11:55 am
Did you win yet????
V
October 19th, 2008 at 3:26 pm
Love it! Gimme more
October 19th, 2008 at 3:37 pm
Oh man… more Jambrea more… please.
October 19th, 2008 at 4:00 pm
Man, this is something else. My wife would go nuts over this type of story.
October 19th, 2008 at 4:36 pm
Hey, this is pretty decent. Thanks for writing it!
October 20th, 2008 at 11:04 am
Fabulous, Jambrea! When do we get more???
October 20th, 2008 at 12:09 pm
Excellent scene. Can’t wait to read the rest of it!
October 21st, 2008 at 12:28 pm
Very cool entry, Jambrea. =) Is this part of a work in progress?
October 21st, 2008 at 2:09 pm
I just wanted to take a second and thank everyone for all your great comments! As of right now this isn’t a work in progress, but from all the response, I think I’ll have to change that! lol Again…Thank you everybody!!
October 24th, 2008 at 7:19 pm
Ooooo! I love it! Yes, hon, please…make this a work in progress.
October 27th, 2008 at 9:03 am
Nice! You have piqued my interest I definitely want more
October 27th, 2008 at 9:07 am
Just like a good writer to leave you hanging and begging for more,AWESOME!!!!
October 27th, 2008 at 10:45 am
It’s cruel to tease and leave us all hanging like this! A good sexy and spooky beginning.
October 27th, 2008 at 1:20 pm
Sounds mysterious! Of course, I need to know more.
October 28th, 2008 at 10:06 am
Jambrea! This is sooooo yummy. More please!
October 30th, 2008 at 9:24 am
More please…!
October 30th, 2008 at 10:06 am
Oh my!! Phew!
October 30th, 2008 at 10:19 am
Very intriging…way to go…
October 30th, 2008 at 10:19 am
Mmmmm…don’t leave me hanging!
October 30th, 2008 at 11:42 am
“I am the path you are to walk” and “enter my home”….is my mind in the gutter or what!
Sounds Wonerful!
Enter Me!
Darby
darbyscloset at yahoo dot com
October 30th, 2008 at 11:48 am
Love this - makes you want to dive right in and get to the bottom of things! Good job!
October 30th, 2008 at 11:49 am
Oooh, way to leave us hanging, Jambrea! I loved this. Great job!! =)
Anara
October 30th, 2008 at 8:19 pm
Oooh, great beginning! That cage sure is intriguing…
October 30th, 2008 at 9:04 pm
Excellent Jambrea!!! Happy Halloween!
Jamie
October 31st, 2008 at 10:05 am
I love this…magic suspense…I need more Jambrea. Great, great, great.