Bo Perkins
Be Careful of What You Seek
Clods of wet grass and earth launched skyward as the undeniable scent of Locabo’s prey invaded her nostrils. Anticipation of the hunt and capture, gave way to lust for the taste of blood, and with a throaty growl, she launched 180 pounds of tempered muscle at the woman. Muzzle agape, incisors bare, she aimed for her victim’s throat…
For thirty days now, she’d trailed her. Attraction unmistakable, but the fear, oh the fear of rejection, too real to risk kept her from approaching. Margie knew that soon she would have to disappear. Yet she hated hiding away for a few days. She wished she had the courage to approach the woman she followed, to talk to her, maybe ask her out. It’ll just end like the others. Once she discovers my secret, she’ll run, and I’d have to destroy her. I’d rather die in agony than kill such a fine creature.
That creature, Doreen Carver, stood all of six foot, without an ounce of fat. Looks to stop a car, yet she never seemed to notice. No one was able to resist eying her lithe form as she strode down the sidewalk oozing confidence with her every motion. So enticing was Doreen, Margie was unable to disappear, despite her need.
Not just any shape-shifter, the moon determined Margie’s animal form. The October moon, the strongest of them all, would change her into Locabo, the crazy wolf. Crazy, because no humanness remained after this transformation, all sanity ceased to exist.
The change began. Too late, she raced for the nearest forest, hoping to put enough trees between her and Doreen. As Margie hurdled over briar and dodged under low-lying branches, she felt the pain of the shift, and the animal began to dominate her mind. Her direction changed as did her form, and within seconds, she was attacking instead of fleeing. Stopped in midair, she yelped in pain as claws gouged into her throat holding her captive. Her wolf mind could not fathom what had happened. Never before had this occurred.
A voice penetrated the confusion, speaking to her mind not her ears. “You, my beautiful little wolf, are now mine to do with as I please. I will control you as none other before and teach you the joy of being dominated.” A skilled tongue, languid and warm, opened her, sending waves of exotic pleasure coursing through her veins. The sensations calmed Locabo, but deep within, Margie’s desire burned hot, and as feral was forced back into human, Margie caught sight of her counter attacker, her dominatrix. Another werewolf who shifted before her eyes.
Margie would never forget that Halloween, the night Doreen, the object of her desire, captured her will, showed her the power of submitting, and taught Margie what punishments would befall her if she refused.
October 6th, 2008 at 8:59 am
Ooh…never imagined heated Lesbian Weres. *Yowza*
Margie just couldn’t leave Pandora’s - I mean, Doreen’s - box alone now, could she?
Simply wicked, Bo!
Bryl
October 6th, 2008 at 4:25 pm
Bo, this is terrific! Very avant garde and I like it.
October 6th, 2008 at 4:31 pm
Oooh, delicious!
October 6th, 2008 at 4:50 pm
Bo!
Verra nice!
I like the f/f slant. You could really run with this one. (Ouch!)
October 6th, 2008 at 4:52 pm
Nice descriptions and active verbs, Bo! I admire that kind of writing when I see it since I’m constantly working on it myself.
Ash
October 6th, 2008 at 5:11 pm
Thank you Bryl, Sloane and Jeanne. I think that when I finish the one I am working on, I may just expand this one too:)
Bo
October 6th, 2008 at 5:41 pm
Awesome story Bo! Thanks so much for sharing your talent. (It’s about time) lol
October 6th, 2008 at 6:05 pm
Be Careful what you seek.
Great excerpt Bo,
Best of luck.
Regards
Margaret Tanner
October 6th, 2008 at 8:06 pm
Wow Bo, I love the metaphor of the animal like attraction between these two women, quite erotic.
October 6th, 2008 at 8:11 pm
Thank you Ash, Sunny and Margaret. I am stoked for real. Just reading these comments from all of you, I feel that even if I don’t win this contest, I am already a winner.
October 6th, 2008 at 8:12 pm
Thank you Kelly for your kind words.
October 6th, 2008 at 8:40 pm
Girl, if you don’t submit (Purring thought distracts Lena for a moment) this to a publisher, you are so missing out on an opportunity. This is HOT stuff.
Lena
October 6th, 2008 at 9:11 pm
Way to go Bo as I who does read erotica I found this very enticing hope you expand this
October 6th, 2008 at 9:25 pm
OMG Bo!! What an awesome piece. YOWZER! *fans self*
Very Nice Bo!Never imagained a F/F Werewolf story.
Raine D.
October 6th, 2008 at 9:40 pm
Thank you Lena, Joanne and Raine. You all will never truly realize what these words mean to me.
October 6th, 2008 at 9:43 pm
Quite delicious, Bo! Would LOVE to read more…with a few cold showers along the way! lol
October 6th, 2008 at 10:11 pm
Fantastic Bo! I love this. You best have more written, young lady! Hot hot hot!
October 6th, 2008 at 10:20 pm
Great story, left me wanting to read more from you!
October 6th, 2008 at 10:38 pm
I really enjoyed your story, Bo, you were able to convey a lot within a very short story, only the best authors can do that. Congratulations!
Gretchen
October 6th, 2008 at 10:55 pm
Nice read Bo!! Did not know that you were THAT talented. That piece inspired the reader to want more. Please do expand it was very good!
October 7th, 2008 at 12:05 am
They say that a good short story leaves you wnating more and this story meets that qualification!! More! More! More, Bo!!!
October 7th, 2008 at 12:07 am
What an enticing and well written story Bo, it leaves me, well, aching for more! Wow you have some real talent lady!
Fondly,
Kathleen
October 7th, 2008 at 12:12 am
Great story, Bo. You have a great talent. I enjoyed reading you! Please write more!
October 7th, 2008 at 4:00 am
Nice story Bo! I love the name of the heroine *vbg*
Maggie
October 7th, 2008 at 4:07 am
Amazing Bo - thank you for sharing - now I know what erotica is - wow
October 7th, 2008 at 5:08 am
Great, all the good ones are taken. I’m a sucker; I fell for both of them.
bill/elliott
October 7th, 2008 at 7:07 am
Bo, please tell me you have more of this. I agree with Lena, you should submit this. Wow. Very active scene, full of heat and just enough suspense to keep you guessing to the end. Excellent work. You got me hooked. *WEG*
October 7th, 2008 at 10:39 am
Very, very intriging BO! I enjoyed this excerpt and I hope you continue to write more of this story…love it! JonM.
October 7th, 2008 at 11:37 am
Bo…Wow, very well written. It left me wanting more. Me and my ways LOL, I found it very erotic. I loved it. BRAVO
October 7th, 2008 at 2:50 pm
Thank you everyone for the kind words. I am flying on a natural high. I never dreamed that something I wrote would be met with such high compliments.
October 7th, 2008 at 6:58 pm
Very hot….want to read more!!!! Awesome job Bo, can’t wait for more!
October 7th, 2008 at 7:11 pm
Bo, as a skeptic who has been on the lookout for GOOD lesbian erotica over the last 25+ years, I have to say this excerpt shows a lot of potential. I’d love to read more and see these two characters fleshed out on both human and animal sides.
October 7th, 2008 at 9:32 pm
OO, Nice job, Bo. I like the suspense and the way you draw a reader in immediately. I can’t wait to see the entire story if you publish it
October 7th, 2008 at 9:52 pm
Bo:
Surprised me you did! Excellent writing! Keep it up!
Flo
October 8th, 2008 at 12:50 am
Bo,
Well written, rarely do I see something so well crafted that it can erupt or flow in almost any direction. I am anxious to read more.
October 8th, 2008 at 6:27 am
TOTAL LOVE IT MORE FROM FROM BO PLEASE
October 8th, 2008 at 7:31 pm
I am so proud of you Bo…I loved this!
October 9th, 2008 at 12:20 am
locobo….love it!
October 9th, 2008 at 9:36 am
Wow. This is great.
October 10th, 2008 at 1:28 am
I’m not surpised you’ve always had so much talent, I just hope people realize what a ” gem ” we have in you . Thank you My friend for always sharing you with Me and others. What a wonderful “gift ” your mind and your lasting friendship.
October 10th, 2008 at 1:40 am
wow! I really like this. love to read more.
October 10th, 2008 at 5:49 am
Yeeeowwch…nice job! More please?
October 10th, 2008 at 5:49 pm
Excellent read, Bo. Now, write the book.
October 10th, 2008 at 8:47 pm
Very Exciting,Excellent story, Keep up the good work!
October 12th, 2008 at 5:44 am
Excellent!!! - had me from the beginning right to the very end “wanting” more. Love it - can’t wait for another story or a continuance of this one - well done
October 12th, 2008 at 11:35 pm
As I read I began tingling. Could’t wait for the next line. Good job Bo.
October 12th, 2008 at 11:54 pm
Finished reading this and all I could think of was My submitting lover… Gets the juices running for sure!!! Good writing!
October 12th, 2008 at 11:58 pm
Delicious story … unexpected Hitchcock ending.
October 13th, 2008 at 12:03 am
SUCH AN AWESOME STORY.. LEFT ME REALY WANTING TO READ MORE AND I DIFF WILL SHARE THIS WITH FRIENDS WHO I KNOW WILL ALSO ENJOY YOUR GREAT STORY..
October 13th, 2008 at 12:05 am
What a weaver of tales, how you draw the reader in like a clever spider, more please!
October 13th, 2008 at 12:06 am
Very cool!!! what’s next???
October 13th, 2008 at 12:41 am
VERY WELL DONE. COMPELLING STORYLINE. VERY ORIGINAL. CANT WAIT FOR MORE
October 13th, 2008 at 12:52 am
Awesome story really enjoyed reading it. Very well written. Thank you very much for sharing your talent and your gift with us
October 13th, 2008 at 4:45 am
Way to go gal! This was a very entertaining, well written read, and I really hope you win, as you deserve it with this deliciously naughty story! Good luck!
Sassy
October 13th, 2008 at 9:27 pm
Bo you are amazing. This pulled me in and captured my interest, I don’t think this has been done before.I want more. I am gong to keep my eye on you sir, you are going to be a wonderful asset to the writing world.
Cheers!
October 13th, 2008 at 9:28 pm
Simply Wicked Bo! Great description. You pulled me right in … I so wanted to know more.
Thanks for sharing.
October 14th, 2008 at 4:30 pm
WTG Bo! Very well written. You left me wanting to read more. Keep up with your writing my friend.
October 16th, 2008 at 8:02 pm
This was great, I really liked the story. Great Job Bo.
October 16th, 2008 at 10:34 pm
Well I read a lot of the other comments and they all have expressed just what I also feel..You really did get a lot said in such a small amount of wordage and as all the others stated I feel u MUST continue this because it really does SIZZLE hun…Great Work and god luck….
Karmel
October 18th, 2008 at 2:56 am
BO!!! I knew you had talent, but I never had any clue you could write this tight. You not only set the reader down into the setting, you capture every nuance of the scene without going overboard! Bravo, sis! I’m SOOO proud of you!
October 19th, 2008 at 12:08 am
#3 Be careful:
Excellent story. Leaves you wanting more. Very discriptive. Well worded. Lots of action.
Great job.
October 20th, 2008 at 11:09 pm
Wow, Bo, I am impressed! Way too short!!!! I want more
Way to go for coming out of your comfort zone and sharing with all your new fans
October 20th, 2008 at 11:25 pm
This is great Bo!
October 22nd, 2008 at 7:37 pm
I like shape shifting stories, Bo. You’re a good writer.
October 26th, 2008 at 7:56 am
Wow. For being short it had quite a punch.
October 26th, 2008 at 9:54 pm
Bo,
This is fantastic! I’m ready for more.
Hugs,
Destiny :))
October 29th, 2008 at 2:02 pm
Awesome, Bo! So well written in so few words too. Love the ideas of the change being different with each moon as well. *claps*