Demon Lust
By Elizabeth Black
Word count: 500
Victor had summoned Asmodeus, demon of lust, and now he awaited his arrival this Halloween night. Heart racing, his eyes darted at every shadow, fearing yet hoping that the demon would appear.
A muscular arm appeared at the bottom of the bed. Fingers crawling like a spider, the hand inched along his bare leg, raising the hair on his skin. A head and shoulders rose from the foot of the bed, followed by the most deliciously hairy chest that Victor had ever seen. Muscles rippled across the washboard stomach. Sinew wrapped around strong hips and thighs, and sweat glistened on the tanned skin.
Victor’s erection, so huge and purple, begged for the demon’s mouth. The demon leered, baring his teeth, promising release that Victor dared admit that he craved. As if reading his mind, the demon lowered his head to Victor’s dick. Soft lips wrapped around him, sucking on the head. His mouth was like a furnace, wet and hot. Victor’s erection jumped as the demon’s lips and mouth found every sensitive part of his dick, from the head to the base of his shaft. The forked tongue whipped, snakelike, first one way and then the other, and Victor arched his back in ecstasy. Covered with bumps, the tongue danced along his dick, making Victor dig his heels into the mattress. Damn, this is incredible! As plump lips sucked on his head, the tongue moved down his dick and around his balls, one fork around his left ball and the other around his right. That tongue, now reaching beyond eight inches, slid past his balls, down the crack of his ass, and into his anus. Victor’s rectum immediately tightened, feeling every inch of that long tongue, and his heart beat so hard that it hurt. As the tongue entered deeper into his rectum, his orgasm burst so hard that he bucked against the demon’s face. He came in waves, spurting his jizz into the demon’s sucking mouth.
Without thinking, he glanced to his left, and caught his reflection in the bedroom mirror. Rather than a tanned and toned body, he saw a misshapen bull’s head gnaw at his erection as if it were a meat carrot. Horrified, he kicked to get the demon off of him, but Asmodeus pinned him to the bed. The more he kicked, the harder he came, into that maw of rotten teeth and gums. Claws gripped his waist, tearing his flesh. The tongue bore nubs like tiny razors, cutting into his balls and ass, drawing blood. The pain is exquisite! Overcome with agony, Victor came so hard that he passed out.
He awakened at dawn, his entire body wracked with pain. Raw and tender, covered with welts and scratches, his dick felt as if he had sanded it down with gravel. It hurt so badly that he could not wear his boxers. Shadows flickered in the bedroom. Terrified, Victor glanced about his room, seeing nothing, but knowing his fate.
Asmodeus was not done with him.


October 21st, 2008 at 4:35 pm
I loved this one.
sandie
October 21st, 2008 at 10:25 pm
HOT!!!! With a wicked undercurrent of evil haunting yet to come….
October 22nd, 2008 at 12:01 am
Loved it. Especially seeing the illusion and the real and know it made no difference now or again later.
What like to see a fleshed out version –leading up to this. then the ultimate outcome.
October 22nd, 2008 at 6:18 am
Ahhh…the Mistress of Horror has arrived. lol
Great flasher, Lizzie. I sure do feel sorry for this guys jewels. Better get out the ointment. lol
October 22nd, 2008 at 6:58 am
This was great! Loved it!!
October 22nd, 2008 at 8:23 am
Ouch!Very intense indeed!
October 22nd, 2008 at 9:42 am
Lizzie,
What a hot story! Great story.
October 22nd, 2008 at 12:39 pm
Sexy and intense - love it!
October 22nd, 2008 at 1:26 pm
Wow! With just a few short words, you had me in the moment, feeling the bliss, the terror and then the anguish! Fantastic!
October 22nd, 2008 at 8:32 pm
love it
October 22nd, 2008 at 9:25 pm
Wow you got me inthe story then it just gets better
October 23rd, 2008 at 2:01 pm
Lizzie, this was great. Kudos, hon!!
xoxo
October 29th, 2008 at 8:25 am
Wow! That was erotic and horrifying. Great story!
October 29th, 2008 at 9:27 am
Disturbingly hot. WOW.
October 29th, 2008 at 1:51 pm
Hot!!
October 29th, 2008 at 1:57 pm
Oh Elizabeth, this is a HOT DAMN story and I love how you are keeping the mystery in it. This excerpt was such a tease making me want more!
October 29th, 2008 at 2:00 pm
well-written, extremely erotic AND CREEPY!
good luck, girl!
October 29th, 2008 at 4:19 pm
WOW!
It needs to be made into a published short, part of an anthology?
I absolutely LOVE it! The horror of seeing the true demon in the mirror ROCKED.
Good luck Liz,
Mindy
October 29th, 2008 at 5:25 pm
OH so good, Love it.
October 29th, 2008 at 8:06 pm
Ow! Don’t mess with Demons! lol. Great write!
October 30th, 2008 at 2:06 pm
Spooky story that makes you wonder what is going to happen next!!!
October 31st, 2008 at 3:08 pm
Boo! how about that perfect timing for Halloween!Great read!