The Ghost of Halloween Past by Elsa
After a few more hours, Callum rubbed his eyes and left his office and took a shower. Getting ready for bed, he heard people outside trick or treating. He flinched as he had when Fiona touched when he heard the doorbell ring.
As if realizing the occupants inside didn’t want to be bothered, the bell stopped ringing. Callum relaxed and continued to his room. A few seconds later, the ringing doorbell continued. Stomping down the hall with a scowl, Callum opened the door but no one was there. There was no one on the street at all. A cool breeze fell over Callum, making him shiver on the cold, Halloween night. Shutting the door, he locked it, putting the double bolts on just for safety. He then turned on the alarm knowing Fiona had a key and knew the code to shut off the alarm when she came home.
Going back to his room, Callum saw that there were lights on. He narrowed his eyes knowing he had shut them off. Slowing his steps, Callum entered the room and saw no one was there. He shut the light off and went in the bed, turning on his side. A moment later the light turned on again. “Whoever the hell you are, stop tormenting me!” He said in an angry whisper.
“Why would I want to do that, Callum? You like to make everyone around you miserable.”
That voice…. Callum sat up quickly and paled at the sight of the woman who had haunted his dreams for the last two years. “Calisto,” he said on a harsh out take of breath. At her serene smile and nod, Callum shook his head. “No! I’m dreaming, in a minute I’ll wake up and you will be gone.”
Sadly, Calisto, dressed up in her angel costume she died in, shook her head. “That’s what everyone likes to believe, Callum, but you know it’s not true.” As she took a step toward the bed, Callum tripped over the sheets to get away, not wanting to believe what he was seeing. “Yes, I am here, Callum, and I am going to show you the error of your ways.”
Callum shook his head but the room changed turning into the living room of his childhood living room. Callum seen himself as a small boy, chocolate dripping off his face. One of his friends had said something to him, making the young Callum laugh, showing a gap between his front teeth.
“You looked so happy,” Calisto said with a bright smile.
“I was a child then,” Callum said, crossing his arms over his chest. “At that time I didn’t know what evils lurked in the world.
Sighing Calisto put a hand on his shoulder and brought him back to his room. “Fine then, if you won’t let yourself feel, I will leave.” And with that, she was gone in a puff of smoke.


October 15th, 2008 at 5:08 pm
Very intriguing
Sets a sort of eerie mood
Two thumbs up!
=]
October 15th, 2008 at 5:20 pm
wow that was good i like it too short though
October 15th, 2008 at 5:51 pm
Elsa, wow. You have a lot of talent, a lot.xxx
October 15th, 2008 at 8:01 pm
oh…want to know more..very good
October 15th, 2008 at 8:29 pm
Very good story! I like it a lot! Especially Calisto
October 15th, 2008 at 10:00 pm
What a great start so something great to read. I am wondering what will come next! Hurry and write it up will ya? This is a wonderful beginning!
October 16th, 2008 at 12:14 am
Wow! I fully enjoyed this, where can I find more? Graet work!
October 16th, 2008 at 12:37 am
Yeah! Give me more!
October 16th, 2008 at 7:59 am
Very Good Elsa. You should really write more, it’s a very good beginning.
October 16th, 2008 at 3:36 pm
Thanks guys!
October 17th, 2008 at 3:41 pm
Wonderful! Looking fwd to reading more.
October 18th, 2008 at 12:33 pm
Wow Elsa! I am wondering what happens next. Beautiful description and the characters are kickass! Bravo! Keep it up!
October 20th, 2008 at 3:52 pm
Very Ebenezer-esque. You’ve got me wondering who Fiona is, and what is up with this guys past. A lot of mystery packed into a few words. Nice job.
October 23rd, 2008 at 7:50 pm
E, its great as always can’t wait to find out what happens next. MORE MORE MORE!!!
October 23rd, 2008 at 7:54 pm
this is freaking awesome you write so well. Don’t be surprised when your a big famous writer and have a legion of fans begging for the next book.
October 23rd, 2008 at 7:59 pm
Elsa Ric just sent me here to read this. OMG girly its so good why didnt you tell me. You have to win i agree with Ric, you’ll be famous and i can say i knew you when. Gimmie more.
October 23rd, 2008 at 8:31 pm
very well done I look forward to seeing or rather reading more. Keep the good work coming.
October 28th, 2008 at 5:50 pm
I like it quite a lot.
Very good, and creepy.